Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Earnest Layer Reactive for 3WW

Earnest as tulips
your feelings pop out in spring
layer by layer
REACTIVE LOVE
Layer by layer
your feelings pop out in spring
earnest as tulips
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15 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczMarch 25, 2009 at 5:33 PM

    wonderfully built. You've risen to the challenge.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 25, 2009 at 5:49 PM

    Oh this is lovely! Beautifully written!!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 25, 2009 at 5:54 PM

    Hiya Linda, I love this - it's very well written, maybe you'd like to link it too this weeks Naisaiku Challenge? I'd love for everybody to read it.

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  4. susanMarch 25, 2009 at 6:45 PM

    Linda, this is lovely.

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  5. anthonynorthMarch 25, 2009 at 6:55 PM

    Excellent words - and my garden is layering as I write :-)

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  6. Tammy BrierlyMarch 25, 2009 at 8:57 PM

    Wonderful Linda! Is thia Naisaiku? I flows so well.

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  7. Tumblewords:March 25, 2009 at 10:51 PM

    Good job! It doesn't feel like a form, per se... Has nice rhythm and lovely words with fine imagery!

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  8. AnonymousMarch 26, 2009 at 8:18 AM

    enjoyed reading this :)

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  9. Sherri B.March 26, 2009 at 8:56 AM

    Refreshing and uplifting...it put a 'spring' in my step. Thanks! :~)

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  10. totomaiMarch 26, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    yes... and the form is very well done

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  11. PJDMarch 26, 2009 at 10:44 AM

    It's a gorgeous haiku turned into the other thing (naisaiku?). I love that you did the 575 and turned it around the fulcrum of reactive love. But the image of feelings popping out, earnest as tulips... wonderful!

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  12. AnonymousMarch 26, 2009 at 9:26 PM

    Cool construction!

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  13. Daily PanicMarch 27, 2009 at 3:25 PM

    I like this expression of love in bloom.

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  14. gautami tripathyMarch 27, 2009 at 8:22 PM

    Great Naisaiku! Very springy!

    A Climb Through Altered Landscapes

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  15. spacedlawMarch 29, 2009 at 4:07 AM

    Nice image.

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