Monday, February 23, 2009

Twilight in Berlin, NH for One Single Impression














All day you scowled
grumbling about this and that
Finally, at five

we sat to relax
opened a bottle of wine
and you smiled at me

The gray clouds of life
turned to lavender and slipped
behind the mountains.
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13 comments:

  1. floretaFebruary 23, 2009 at 1:40 PM

    beautiful picture!! i like that it goes from scowling to smiling.

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  2. Tumblewords:February 23, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    Great - loving twilight!

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2009 at 5:39 PM

    Very much enjoyed this relationship-as-landscape. Beautifully done!

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  4. anthonynorthFebruary 23, 2009 at 6:16 PM

    Beautiful description of the scene.

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  5. DeLiFebruary 23, 2009 at 6:35 PM

    i like it when "gray" turns to "lavender"...it brinsg out the poetry

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  6. sgreerpittFebruary 23, 2009 at 7:27 PM

    ah, I've known many days like that -- where twilight brings the moment to let go, let gray turn to lavender!

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  7. SandyCarlsonFebruary 23, 2009 at 9:46 PM

    Why it is so lovely to sit down to a glass of wine with a loved one at the end of the day.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2009 at 3:54 AM

    u paint well every emotion !

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  9. Bruce MillerFebruary 24, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    nicely tergiversated ~ growls to painted sky

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  10. Quiet PathsFebruary 24, 2009 at 10:20 AM

    A wonderful snapshot of a moment in the life. Great job.

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  11. Tammy BrierlyFebruary 24, 2009 at 2:21 PM

    A wonderfully captured evening Linda.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    Hi Linda, that's the kind of twilight I'm looking for!

    The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

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  13. PattiFebruary 28, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    Beautiful picture and I loved the line "The gray clouds of life" and how the poem was uplifting and relaxed at the end.

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