Thursday, February 19, 2009

Naisaiku: Under Quilts

Impulses, yearnings,
managed risks, and candid love~
pieces of romance
UNDER QUILTS
pieces of romance,
managed risks, and candid love~
impulses, yearnings.

13 comments:

  1. You've made every word count here.

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  2. You certainly did. I'm going to have to check out the style here.

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  3. Phew, so that's what goes on under quilts!

    Thanks for taking up The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

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  4. This was a fun read! Which is what it's all about, thanks for playing along.

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  5. This was soooo nice. Nice sensual feel to it.

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  6. Hi Linda, I'm putting you on the participants blog roll on the NaisaiKu.. site, is there any chance of you linking back to us in your 'poetry sites' sidebar? It would mean a lot to me and the future of this weekly prompt. Many thanks, again for joining in on Week One of
    The NaisaiKu.. Challenge!

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  7. Beautifully scripted.
    I could see it as "sensual economics" with shares of Impulses,yearnings,risks and love adding to a perfect returns[under the quilt]

    Lovely!

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  8. Linda, Thanks for the link!

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  9. Didn't know this form. Enjoyed it. I liked that it doesn't simply fit a form but sings. Thanks.

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  10. I like the way "managed risks" plays in this surrounded by the more impulsive connotations of the other words.

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