Saturday, December 20, 2008

Late for Sunday Scribblings

Too Late

I’m poemed out.
It’s late in the school
day and I used
all my words already
in earlier classes.

They were bunched
up like cattle waiting
to be let out into a field
after a long, cold winter.
And when I picked up
my pencil, the gate
swung open
and they gamboled
down my arm,
and stretched
out on the clean
pasture of my paper

leaving me empty.
I close and lock
the fence, put my
notebook away,
and smile wryly
at these stragglers.

14 comments:

  1. This is delightful! I'm still smiling at the middle verse. I'll never look at cows in the same way again.

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  2. This is delightful! I'm still smiling at the middle verse. I'll never look at cows in the same way again.

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  3. I am not only poemed out, I am just plain out of words - spoken or written. Mine have fled to parts unknown. You expressed it so well!

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  4. oh linda! you can write anything, and I will love reading it! Want to write out my bills for me??!!

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  5. And lovely stragglers they are.

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  6. Your "out of words" poem has left me speechless with admiration. Looks like I'm one of many.

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  7. Excellently done! If that's poemed out, you'll never be short of words!

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  8. So clever - as always - doubt you'll ever come up on the late side OR the short side! Enjoyed!

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  9. using your words up...i get that! brilliant!

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  10. "poemed out" love it

    "used up all your words earlier"
    clever and light response to the prompt

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  11. i am all smiles !!!! sweet verse :)

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  12. Very cool poem :)
    I agree, I will never look at cows the same again - love it

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