Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Jealous, Hesitate, Neglect for 3WW

Jealous of my books,
you think I neglect you~
a hesitant kiss.

6 comments:

  1. Great, yes, but (gulp) I think you're a syllable short on the second line.

    (add may.)

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  2. this is marraige,,, i mean,, isn't it????

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  3. a hesitant kiss - love that!

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  4. made me smile !!! wondering what makes my friends jealous !!

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