Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Faith, Miracle, Whisper for 3WW

Faith Hill
on a CD.
Music’s a miracle,
a lover at my ear with sweet
whispers.
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9 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczDecember 24, 2008 at 7:06 PM

    I'm going to have to try this form of poetry. I know I've done it in the past, at university, but it's got a really interesting construction.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 24, 2008 at 10:03 PM

    I agree with ThomG, this form is very interesting. Perhaps I'll try to play around with it a little.

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  3. AnonymousDecember 25, 2008 at 12:47 AM

    so sweet !! kinda romantic :D

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  4. PJDDecember 25, 2008 at 2:39 AM

    Great twist on the prompt. I also used Faith as a name in one of my haiku, but then you already saw that. I love the image, and so efficient.

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  5. paisleyDecember 25, 2008 at 10:38 AM

    merry christmas to you and all of those that love you......

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  6. gautami tripathyDecember 25, 2008 at 11:27 AM

    Ah! Love the Cinquain!

    symmetry in poetry or what?

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  7. quin browneDecember 26, 2008 at 2:26 PM

    oh, i liked this... and envy anyone who writes poetry...

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  8. MelodyDecember 26, 2008 at 6:40 PM

    I agree, this is romantic and a very interesting form of poetry.

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  9. AnonymousDecember 26, 2008 at 6:48 PM

    Nicely done!

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