Wednesday, November 19, 2008

3WW: Corrupt, Intellect, Tension

Corrupt Intellect Tension
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Red claws
squeezing my neck,
corrupting intellect.
I see dots in front of my eyes.
Tension.
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7 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczNovember 19, 2008 at 4:07 PM

    Wow, I really like the construction of this.

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  2. quin browneNovember 19, 2008 at 4:37 PM

    whoa.

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  3. Tumblewords:November 19, 2008 at 6:20 PM

    Cool! I feel the tension!
    An aside: Do you think the dots are on your blog page? Just saying. Grin.

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  4. DJ MommyNovember 19, 2008 at 6:50 PM

    This gave me the chills. Spooky feeling!

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  5. AnonymousNovember 19, 2008 at 8:11 PM

    I love a cinquain and you wrote this so well. Awesome.

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  6. LucyNovember 19, 2008 at 11:50 PM

    red claws? a lobster attack? haha
    great job Lyn!

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  7. JanNovember 22, 2008 at 9:02 PM

    Sounds like a migraine to me. Jan

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