Wednesday, November 12, 2008

3WW: Blush, Quiver, Tenderness

Blush Quiver Tenderness
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3:43 pm

Twilight
paints blush
on the cheek
of the sky.

I’m home
alone
writing a poem
letting

the tenderness
of the hour
buoy my
deflating spirits

after a day
of shooting
arrows of literature
into the minds

of stubborn students.
Now, I slide
those arrows
back into the quiver

of my heart
where they’ll
sharpen
for another day.

11 comments:

  1. Even after a day of slinging arrows at stubborn students, you've left yourself enough creativity of hit a bulls-eye.

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  2. u teach literature? u must have a bunch of happy students!

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  3. having listened to my daughter complain how difficult it is to student teach asl and tell students to behave when you can't speak... this spoke volumes.

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  4. nice, arrows sharpen in the quiver of your heart, very nice. where do you suppose cupid quivers his arrows?

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  5. I love this, you know how to use your words to convey even the simplest emotion, I like the first part

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  6. OH how I wish I could write like you Linda.
    simply beautiful.

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  7. so well done! the "shooting arrows of literature into the minds of stubborn students" is perfect! then returning them for sharpening overnight - made me smile.

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