Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Deny Smile Uncomfortable.

Well, it's the end of the school year and my mom is living with us for a few weeks so I haven't have much time for writing. Here's a little haiku using the three words:
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You smiled at a girl.
That made me uncomfortable.
You deny. I know.
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12 comments:

  1. paisleyJune 4, 2008 at 9:50 PM

    well thanks for stopping in anyway... i will be here when you get more free time...

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  2. TCJune 4, 2008 at 9:58 PM

    Good luck with all you have going on :)

    Short, sweet and to the point is often a good way to go.

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  3. gautami tripathyJune 4, 2008 at 11:28 PM

    Sometimes life gets busy.


    Sweet haiku..

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  4. ForgetfuloneJune 5, 2008 at 12:10 AM

    Excellent haiku.

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  5. Pirate PrincessJune 5, 2008 at 1:28 AM

    LOL! Caught in the act - shame shame! :)

    Have a great time with your mom!

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  6. anthonynorthJune 5, 2008 at 4:50 AM

    Caught! What a fool :-)
    Short but great.

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  7. Tammy BrierlyJune 5, 2008 at 10:17 AM

    They always deny it don't they? ;) Enjoy your family Linda.

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  8. GigglesJune 5, 2008 at 5:40 PM

    ah this is good...

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  9. Rae TriggJune 5, 2008 at 10:34 PM

    Very nice - pointed and with a punch.

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  10. AnonymousJune 6, 2008 at 6:46 PM

    one of the edgey detours of love.. eyes see everything..

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  11. Sherri B.June 7, 2008 at 7:38 PM

    So much said with so little words...lol! I enjoyed that. :~)

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  12. Tammie LeeJune 7, 2008 at 8:47 PM

    ouch to the subject
    wonderful to the poem

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