Average Stretch Neck
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It’s after 10 pm.
My eyes have little fires
behind them.
The vise-grip
of late evening
has a firm hold
on the back
of my neck,
squeezing.
I’ve just finished
calculating averages
for my tenth-grade
students, playing
cards with my mom,
who is staying
with us for 6 weeks,
making pork roast,
mashed potatoes,
and broccoli
with cheese sauce
for supper,
and taking myself
and my frustrations
for a walk,
leaking the tribulations
of the day
onto the sidewalk.
Now, I stretch
my fingers over
the keyboard
hoping a perfect
ending to this poem
will magically
slide out.
and ending with perfection it did indeed... wish someone would come cook all that good old american food for me!!!!
ReplyDeletei love how this flows so smoothly, from one idea to the next. and the
ReplyDeletepart that reads 'leaking the tribulations of the day onto the sidewalk' is brilliant, i would say! the ending is so cool...the words match exactly what the reader feels as s/he slides off the ending of the poem itself...perfect all the way around!
And you made it admirably :-)
ReplyDeleteThe magic was there! ;)
ReplyDeleteAnd it did indeed Linda! Wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteI think you got the ending you wished for :)
ReplyDeleteHope things slow down a bit for you! Or you could just give all your 10th graders an A... ;)
absolutely lovely.
ReplyDeleteand now you've gotten me very hungry!!! :)