Saturday, December 1, 2007

Walk

Sunday Scribblings for December 2, 2007

Walk
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I wait
while the lavender
evening
fades to gray
and then changes
into a little black
velvet dress
before
heading out
for my walk
each night.

I sip
the dark
whiskey
of fresh air
and nibble
on the Ritz
cracker
of the moon.

A little conversation
with myself,
a wave
at the stars
and this cocktail
party
is just the treat
I need
after
a busy day.

15 comments:

  1. how much i envy your ability to do things like that alone... it sounds nearly romantic......

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  2. What an absolutely stunning poem! Thank you for sharing it.

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  3. Wow! This gave me a delighted shiver. Nice.

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  4. Lovely, Linda, really lovely imagery.

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  5. What a lovely picture you painted!

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  6. great descriptions! you have a great way of using just the right words. I really love this poem.

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  7. I really enjoyed the cocktail metaphor... you wrote an intoxicating piece! ;)

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  8. Yes! I love the part about the little black dress and whiskey.
    Your clever use of words has made images flash and flash on my mind's screen.
    Frances
    http://blogforth.com

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  9. Exquisite - gentle, warm, image full and overall delightful.

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  10. What a beautiful way to end the evening, esp. loved the boost it gives to relax and enjoy the simple pleasures of nature- and the dress up too :) Thank you.

    UL

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  11. great metaphors. enjoyed this very much.

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  12. Great visuals in words..

    gautami

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  13. Beautiful and unique! Well done!

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