tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post7160550799362015161..comments2023-10-29T08:26:39.264-04:00Comments on Linda's Poems: VillanelleLinda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-42636782657881544612008-02-02T08:18:00.000-05:002008-02-02T08:18:00.000-05:00What a lovely thing to do for your parents. The re...What a lovely thing to do for your parents. The repeating line of the villanelle is perfect for this.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-83833184546135072482008-01-30T23:28:00.000-05:002008-01-30T23:28:00.000-05:00yes, precious and priceless ...just like that day ...yes, precious and priceless ...just like that day in 1949...lovelyULhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-81028660466060118352008-01-30T16:16:00.000-05:002008-01-30T16:16:00.000-05:00I like the way the repetition fed the urgency and ...I like the way the repetition fed the urgency and his impatience.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-73353062815113074282008-01-28T23:01:00.000-05:002008-01-28T23:01:00.000-05:00Linda, I tried to leave a comment a second ago. Bl...Linda, I tried to leave a comment a second ago. Blogger blocked it. If you read my comments twice, oh well!<BR/><BR/>Great poem! The villanelle's repeating lines work to underscore the man's wait on the bus, and then his love of his new daughter, when you change it up.<BR/><BR/>A beautiful snowy night.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-80238333182850482732008-01-28T20:25:00.000-05:002008-01-28T20:25:00.000-05:00linda,, that was priceless... even if you didn't w...linda,, that was priceless... even if you didn't write it today i am thrilled to have it resurrected here from me today... just wonderful......paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.com