tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post386782060744789610..comments2023-10-29T08:26:39.264-04:00Comments on Linda's Poems: Stardust for One single ImpressionLinda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-26536284986158475812009-01-05T04:32:00.000-05:002009-01-05T04:32:00.000-05:00Even if the ending may have been sad at first, you...Even if the ending may have been sad at first, your strength, like the power of the stars, shines through in your writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-89023967014607386112009-01-04T15:14:00.000-05:002009-01-04T15:14:00.000-05:00I like the triumphant feeling at the end, 'wiping ...I like the triumphant feeling at the end, 'wiping stardust from her eyes' Lesson learned. (She still has her own though, carried inside....)mardehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02329428965117461799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-56821441639587131682009-01-04T09:26:00.000-05:002009-01-04T09:26:00.000-05:00Great the way you presented their opposing point o...Great the way you presented their opposing point of views. I too have had experience of a man who didn't deliver.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-79227292000530271572009-01-03T20:51:00.000-05:002009-01-03T20:51:00.000-05:00That is powerful but but good for her for kicking ...That is powerful but but good for her for kicking him out!! She deserved the moon!Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17770013944671340961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-75493150327737333962009-01-02T02:10:00.000-05:002009-01-02T02:10:00.000-05:00Yeah, buddy...!Thanks for the wisdom that is obvio...Yeah, buddy...!<BR/>Thanks for the wisdom that is obviously there. <BR/><BR/>You got the trajectory so right--wow...<BR/><BR/>Thanks--no stardust in your eyes!Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-73011100588942538712009-01-01T20:45:00.000-05:002009-01-01T20:45:00.000-05:00Love this poem.Love this poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-4094292418361711412008-12-31T12:28:00.000-05:002008-12-31T12:28:00.000-05:00Ungratefulness meets the boot... I love it!Ungratefulness meets the boot... I love it!John E. Tranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14594659729954601082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-39432784390822199832008-12-31T05:32:00.000-05:002008-12-31T05:32:00.000-05:00Something for you here :http://creatingnewblog.blo...Something for you here :<BR/><BR/>http://creatingnewblog.blogspot.com/2008/12/awarded.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-39779442197523076382008-12-30T22:30:00.000-05:002008-12-30T22:30:00.000-05:00It's that story. Yes. Excellent - well written and...It's that story. Yes. Excellent - well written and vibrant with truth.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-15026910172613456112008-12-30T22:07:00.000-05:002008-12-30T22:07:00.000-05:00I liked the fact that this piece is so differently...I liked the fact that this piece is so differently tilted re the prompt. It is amazing to me how much moon talk and stardust we'll gather until something shifts. Many people related to this. Well done piece; well written and direct.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-16385958838801890412008-12-30T16:19:00.000-05:002008-12-30T16:19:00.000-05:00I love the image of stardust in our eyes. This was...I love the image of stardust in our eyes. This was sad but so real. I too love all the different takes on "stardust" (Thanks for your kind comment).Melodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05181775494535352497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-81465077635704454092008-12-30T13:54:00.000-05:002008-12-30T13:54:00.000-05:00.."English teachers tend to intimidate me more tha....."English teachers tend to intimidate me more than does a tall woman standing beside me in an elevator!"_<BR/>~great poem-a very happy new year!..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-52660894626719701862008-12-30T12:48:00.000-05:002008-12-30T12:48:00.000-05:00Terrific interpretation of the prompt! Love it--to...Terrific interpretation of the prompt! <BR/>Love it--too bad we don't wipe that stardust from our eyes WHILE they're promising us those moons! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-71527126771957329952008-12-30T11:53:00.000-05:002008-12-30T11:53:00.000-05:00and good for her, too - finally!and good for her, too - finally!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-53098145160107897772008-12-30T10:58:00.000-05:002008-12-30T10:58:00.000-05:00Careful of those guys who promise the moon!I love ...Careful of those guys who promise the moon!<BR/>I love the way you ended your poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-23124114780582631852008-12-30T10:31:00.000-05:002008-12-30T10:31:00.000-05:00Unlike some of the others, I don't see this as "sa...Unlike some of the others, I don't see this as "sad" but as triumphant; standing up for one's self isn't sad. There's wisdom and courage here. I like the contrasting lines, what was promised, what was received.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-8252535121421871162008-12-30T09:25:00.001-05:002008-12-30T09:25:00.001-05:00Most promises do seem to be made of stardust and r...Most promises do seem to be made of stardust and relationships are never what we think they are. Nice job of portraying the insight of reality.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-22043910073222205372008-12-30T09:25:00.000-05:002008-12-30T09:25:00.000-05:00Oh, this is beautiful. Sad, yes, but beautiful.Oh, this is beautiful. Sad, yes, but beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-76139247234426548752008-12-30T09:05:00.000-05:002008-12-30T09:05:00.000-05:00I'm not sure all those fairy tales we grew up with...I'm not sure all those fairy tales we grew up with were helpful, but then again, it's never too late to get the stardust out.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-51434120700307011112008-12-30T05:29:00.000-05:002008-12-30T05:29:00.000-05:00Raw and sad...so well done!Hugs GigglesRaw and sad...so well done!<BR/><BR/>Hugs GigglesGiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-46450602330634985372008-12-30T04:27:00.000-05:002008-12-30T04:27:00.000-05:00One hell of a reality check there. Excellently har...One hell of a reality check there. Excellently hard hitting.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-87939241157236163272008-12-30T00:52:00.000-05:002008-12-30T00:52:00.000-05:00I like the ending. She did good.playing for pleasi...I like the ending. She did good.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/12/playing-for-pleasing-moon.html" REL="nofollow">playing for pleasing the moon</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-73863250954450800432008-12-29T23:25:00.000-05:002008-12-29T23:25:00.000-05:00i dont like empty promises. :( nice take on the pr...i dont like empty promises. :( nice take on the prompt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-90563516282669908732008-12-29T22:37:00.000-05:002008-12-29T22:37:00.000-05:00well girl if that isn't life in the raw i don't kn...well girl if that isn't life in the raw i don't know what is.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586553197417548371.post-88244948141978485022008-12-29T22:32:00.000-05:002008-12-29T22:32:00.000-05:00My first thought: "I wrote this. Am writing this. ...My first thought: "I wrote this. Am writing this. Will write this." Well, very well, done.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com